Review + Giveaway: Fractured by Erin Hayes

August 8, 2014 giveaway, Lindsay's reviews 8

I received this book for free from the author in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

This book may be unsuitable for people under 17 years of age due to its use of sexual content, drug and alcohol use, and/or violence.
Review + Giveaway: Fractured by Erin HayesFractured by Erin Hayes
on July 8th 2014
Genres: Adult, Horror
Source: the author
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Blinded by a mysterious seizure when she was three years old, Bash Martin has managed to carve out a normal life for herself as an adult. Yet she still yearns for a deeper connection with her twin sister Lily, who has always been jealous of the attention their parents bestowed upon Bash due to her disability.

A dream vacation seems like the perfect chance to heal their relationship, but Bash soon realizes there is something terribly wrong with Lily and that her sister is hiding a dark secret. And when a supernatural fire engulfs their hotel and corpses come back to life, the sisters are plunged into a nightmarish world that threatens not only their lives, but their very souls.

So, the first 40% or so of this book is deceptive. It was definitely creepy, but it was a little slow, filled with character building and a whack load of foreshadowing. I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop. I wasn’t even going to put a content warning on the book at that point, because the language was mild, and it wasn’t even violent.

Well… CONTENT WARNING ADDED! It’s amazing how much more we swear when a demon starts to toy with us! And the gore just keeps on coming! Body count? MASSIVE! Once the story reached that pivotal scene, shit got real serious, real fast!

I loved the pivoting character views. The scenes went back and forth between a handful of characters, so it gave me a solid hold on what was going on in various story threads. They each had a unique voice and it was great to know what was going through everyone’s heads. Bathsheba (Bash) is the main character, or at least the one I felt most connected to. She went blind when she was three, so now we have the added terror of removing and augmenting senses. Bash can’t see the horror, but she can hear things scraping in the walls. *shivers* I’m not sure which I would prefer! On the plus side, you wouldn’t have to see the blood and pus, but you also couldn’t see what’s coming for you!

All of the characters kept breaking all the key rules on how to survive a horror story! No wonder they kept dying! 😉 I kept screaming at the book “STOP SPLITTING UP! DON’T OPEN THAT DOOR! Stupid characters deserve everything that’s coming to them… but don’t kill THAT character! HEY! I liked her!”

Honestly, I wasn’t sure how Erin could possibly wrap everything up and not leave me completely pissed off that she killed all the wrong people. And yet? She actually managed it. I’m okay with it. It feels right. *deep cleansing breath*

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Sci-fi junkie, video game nerd, and wannabe manga artist, Erin Hayes writes a lot of things. Sometimes she writes books, like the fantasy mystery Death is but a Dream and the sci-fi middle grade book Jacob Smith is Incredibly Average.You can reach her at and she’ll be happy to chat. Especially if you want to debate Star Wars.
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One woman stuck in a house full of boys, I immerse myself in books and save my sanity by reading, writing and blogging. I'll read just about anything, from any genre, and LOVE supporting Indie authors. <3

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  • Ha wow this sounds intense! And I’m glad the slow-ish start was made up for afterwards. I also am curious about the ending now – I love being satisfied and surprised by a great ending. It can really make or break a book, imo! Great review, Lindsay!

    • Lindsay Galloway

      Thanks! 🙂

  • Victoria

    That cover is awesome! And I love your review…my interest is definitely peaked..I’ve added this to my TBR so I will be checking it out. Thanks for sharing 🙂

    • Lindsay Galloway

      You’re very welcome! And thank you for checking out the review 😀

  • Tina Myers

    Great looking book. Thank you!

  • CJ Schindler

    Sounds like a great book, interesting review!

  • Joseph A Hawkshaw

    Awesome cover looks so sweet.

  • Katie

    Love creepy stories about twins, definitely want to read!